Genre: Paranormal romance, drama
Type: Series
Characters: Eloise & Devon
Characters: Eloise & Devon
Prompt:83. Anxious
Word Count: 709+
Warning: bad Photoshop work, barely visible pregnancy test strip
Rating: M- (coarse language, adult situations, nudity. N.B-Applies to the whole series)
Summary: Eloise doesn't know how to break the news to Devon
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While Leigh agreed to help a friend in Champs Les Sims, Eloise wished she had a friend to help her with her dilemma…
She knew she had to get out of the bathroom before Devon grew suspicious, but she just couldn’t bring herself to go out there and face him.
What would she say? How would she break the news to him?
She sat on the edge of the bath tub and looked at the pregnancy test in her hand, and she wanted to kick herself. The two blue lines scowled at her, subtly reminding her, this was what she’d wanted. She’d chased after Devon. Like a predator she’d taken advantage of him while he was still vulnerable from his break-up from Tamsyn, and she’d practically begged him to make love to her every single day these last six months. Well, almost every single day. When it’s all said and done she’d asked for it.
But they’d used protection every single time. They were careful. And that’s why she was so bitter over this. She did everything right, Devon too. So why the hell were the two blue lines glaring at her? She dropped the test beside her, and wailed like a baby, wishing Leigh was there. She’d know what to do.
Her parents wouldn't take the news well. They were just getting over her stunt of moving in with Devon, and now they’d have to deal with her having a baby out of wedlock…She was convinced they’d kill her or disown her, or both.
“Honey? Are you okay? You’ve been in there for twenty minutes. Not that I’m keeping tabs on you, but-” Devon. She drowned him out. She was pissed at him and his super sperm. Pissed at her body for welcoming it. Pissed that he’d think she was trapping him with this baby, keeping him forever tied to her. She knew how Krisis felt about Jacqueline. Surely Devon would feel the same way too.
“Eloise, if you don’t come out, I’ll break down this door!” He growled on the other side. He didn’t make threats lightly. Devon would break down the door. Gingerly, she got up from the tub, and unlocked the door.
“What’s wrong?” He asked with concern in his eyes. He’d seen her cry lots of times in the past few weeks. Most times it was for Leigh. But he’d never seen her so miserable. And for a crazy second he was afraid something was seriously wrong between them.
She threw the pregnancy test at him. He looked at it, not sure what it was supposed to be. He’d never seen one in his life.
“Nice,” he mumbled, but the angry scowl on her face told him it wasn’t nice.
“Nice? I’m pregnant and you think it’s nice?” Eloise screamed at him, but he didn’t mind. He hung on to the word pregnant.
“We’re pregnant?” He repeated, pulling her in his arms, awe and wonder written all over his face.
“Yes we are! I don’t know how it’s possible. But if the test is right we’re three months along. I thought I was just stressed with work, and with everything happening around here with Leigh and Krisis, and that’s why I missed my period. I didn’t suspect a thing until a friend mentioned it at work. Devon, if I knew, I would have done something sooner. I’m sorry. I--” She broke down again and cried, wishing she could pinpoint the exact moment it happened. If she could, she would go back and change it all.
“Eloise, stop!” He kissed her eyelids, before moving on to her lips. “It’s okay. I’m thrilled with the news. It would have been great to have a baby after we’re married, but it’s here now, and there’s no reason for you to cry. I love you, and I’ll be with you always.”
“You will? But Krisis--” She tried to explain her fears and worry, but Devon cut her off.
“Krisis hates Jacqueline. But I bet if it was Leigh, he would have been ecstatic.” He replied, gently trailing his hand on her flat tummy.
“So there’s a baby in there?” He asked in awe.
“Yep. There’s a little Starlington on the way. We have to tell Leigh,” she cried, excited suddenly. If Krisis couldn’t bring her home, surely the news of her pregnancy would. But first, they had to find her.
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On a good note...
The baby name poll results are in.....drum rolls....
37 people (72%) liked the name Blake. 10 voters (19%) liked Chad, and only 4 of you (7%) loved Bailey....Thank you all for voting, it will be a few more prompts before you all meet Blake Starlington...
I have put up another poll, so please be so kind and humor me. It's on the same spot where the old poll was.
Thank you all for your continued support, and Karima, thanks a mil, for trying to recreate the pregnancy test for me.










Awww I love them sooooooo much!! I love Devon and thank you for having him shirtless!! Woot! Can't wait to see baby Starlington!!!!
ReplyDeleteAwesome update it was so wonderful!
"Nice," LMAO!!! I don't know why that was so funny to me! Maybe it's the typical male "I don't see the big deal" response! Then he adds "we're pregnant?" mannnn she was in there crying her eyes out trying to find the right way to deal with it and he was so smooth with his reaction! I love this prompt the best so far in season 2! That made me day!
ReplyDeleteLeigh would be so happy and that Tamsyn biotch...HA HA!
You already know how I voted :)
Daijahv, LOL. I bet you love him cos he's shirtless.
ReplyDeleteThank you.
Qui, he was smooth wasn't he. Devon's a sweetie when he wants to be one. He honestly didn't see what the fuss was about. OUCH, I'm hurt. So all the other prompts were shit? OMG! *faints*
ReplyDeleteLeigh will def be happy. Funny you should mention Tamsyn...
Yep, LMAO. I would have been surprised if you'd voted otherwise.
~ OK! I voted,& you won't be suprised!!!!
ReplyDelete~ Hey he is a man,what does she expect!I bet that suprised her though,his quiet acceptance!And his delight at it!
~ Val,I love your skillzs!
~ Loved this update, too!
~ Please get better soon,like yesterday!(",)
Karima, actually, I am surprised! Shame on you!
ReplyDelete-It was def not the reaction she was expecting
-Please, don't mess with me. That sucked, big time. But thanks so much for recreating that pregnancy test. I hope you could see it...
-I'm glad you did. About time we had some good news I guess.
-I'm trying. My nose is all stuffy, and my head feels like concrete. And DH keeps yelling at me to go to bed. I think I'll sign off now. There's something I want to send you...I'll PM you.
oh yeah, I'm right.
ReplyDeleteFuck Tamsyn!
Oh yeah, I'm right, oh yeah, I'm right.
Come on Leigh, You got a niece or Nephew on the way. Help Eloise or she'll be hopeless.
Can I agree with cute-and-masculine-but-not-as-good-as-my-Krisis Devon
Leah, so...were your suspicions right then?
ReplyDeleteIt's the second time someone mentions Tamsyn today. Maybe it's a sign she should come back.
LOL, I can just picture you dancing.
Oh yeah, Leigh will be home, don't worry.
"cute-and-masculine-but-not-as-good-as-my-Krisis Devon", now that's one long MF description. I cracked up when I saw it. Don't worry, you can have Krisis all to yourself. You're his only fan, I think.
Oh! I am so happy for Devon and Eloise! I can't wait to meet baby Blake!
ReplyDeleteLeigh is going to be so happy to come home and meet her nephew!
EEEEK!!! YAY LEIGH COME HOME PLEASE!!! I am so excited to see that Eloise is preggers.. I hope it brings her home.. I loved Dev's comment about how Krisis hates Jackie and would have been happy if it was Leigh... it just proves that he has grown to like Krisis in a way :)
ReplyDeleteI thought that, too - with Dev's comment, he finally realizes that Krisis loves Leigh and would never want to hurt her! One revalation down, two more to go!
ReplyDeleteThere's no way those pics look photoshopped - you found an S3 preggers test - you had to. I'm going to send you the stuff for my new siggy now that you've once again proven your amazing skillz! (but not until you're better - promise!)
Loved, loved, LOVED that Devon said "we're pregnant?" He's so much more than man-candy. (yet still so tasty...)
GREAT Prompt, but with this poll, I must repectfully ask...
Really?
SHouldn't it be more like
A) Die screaming
B) Die slowly
C) Die gruesomely
D) Be filmed dying, so others may enjoy repeatedly viewing her death
E) all of the above
***Just sayin. ;)
Now you know good and well that I don't think any of the other prompts were shit! I just found this one to be extremely funny and one of my favorites. Maybe I should have worded it better! Sorry! *hugs* you know I love this like a fat kid loves cake! I was just thinking about when we first spoke about you doing this challenge and you said you couldn't wait to get this story out there. I am so glad you did!
ReplyDeleteOH GOD SHE IS COMING BACK? *faints*
I like E Jill!
ReplyDeleteHolley, glad you liked it. Yeah, Leigh will be there when the baby's born, and she'll be thrilled at the news when she finds out.
ReplyDeleteKristen, you'e right, Devon's warming up to Krisis. So you're thrilled with the news? I'm glad.
ReplyDeleteJill, Devon knows Krisis loves his sister, and he knows how Leigh feels about him too, so he can try and be an ass all he wants, but Krisis isn't going anywhere, so he'd rather keep the peace. But he's slowly warming towards him, and he's got a lot of respect for him, personally and professionally.
ReplyDeleteLOL, you're much too kind, and I'll be happy to try my hand at your siggie. Send me the stuff whenever you're ready.
Devon...he is a sweetie, and he's brawn and brains too...well sometimes at least.
Love, love the poll choices; I should have consulted you first before putting it up.
*shocked gasp* @ Holley
ReplyDeleteQui, I know. LOL. I was just pulling your leg. I'm glad you encouraged me to have a go at the challenge.
ReplyDeleteAbout Tamsyb...I'm not saying anything, but if you think long and hard, and you combine all the threads at DD, especially the most recent ones, you'll find your answer.
Oh, a baby! I can't wait to see their kid.
ReplyDeleteI hope Leigh is coming back soon, I miss the scenes between her and Krisis. I like their
chemistry.
Dutchy, it will be a while yet :)
ReplyDeleteLeigh is coming back soonish. It won't be long now.
Hmm everyone is having babies! This prompt reminds me of my favorite character...Tamsyn, I wonder what she would think about all of this :(
ReplyDeleteTamsyn,we'll see :-/
ReplyDeleteI forget to check back for like - a week? And suddenly there are NINE NEW CHAPTERS! Its so *SELF-COMBUSTION* i just don't know what to comment on!!! I love blake in advance naturally!
ReplyDeleteWhen do we get to dance around a bonfire of Jaqulines ashes? I have blood-lust right now. RAGE. Pooooooooooooooor Krisis! HE CANT LET HIMSELF FALL OUT OF LOVE WITH LEIGH!!!
Please PLEASE PLEASE!!! can Jackie die?
Awww Devon is a real sweetheart. He gets the sweetheart of the year award from me. I think he'd make a great dad and the fact that he's being so supportive is really going to make it easier for Eloise.
ReplyDeleteTamsyn is going to flip her lid! Actually I can see her entering a self-pity session about how she could have been the one having a baby with Devon.
- I am happy for Eloise and Devon, but they used protection...hmmm...I know its not 100% but that is quite a small chance to get pregnant...again me thinking to far into things. Was she with anyone before Devon? Just a question.
ReplyDelete- Leigh I am sure will be ecstatic!
- Nice poll of course I had to answer "Lock her up and throw away the key." Death seemed to be too easy of an out for her, would be nice for her to sit and think of Krisis and Leigh together everyday for the rest of her life, squirming every moment!
- Wonderful chapter!
Eni, I'm always happy to get new readers, and new perspective on the prompts. I'm so glad you found your way over here.
ReplyDeleteLOL @ "bonfire of Jaqulines ashes". Let's wait for the poll to close and we'll see from there.
Nope, Leigh's like his adrenaline rush, there's no way he'll let go off that high.
Jackie's fate is pretty much decided. I've written her exit from the story already; But I just wanted to know what sort of ending everyone thinks she deserves, hence the poll :)
Thanks for reading.
Trish, thank you, I'll graciously accept it on his behalf.
ReplyDeleteI have a good feeling about Dev, too being a great dad.
Tamsyn's reaction...WAIT for IT...That's all I'm gonna say on that.
NyGirl, they used protection, Eloise was not on contraceptives, but she always insisted on condoms and Devon always agreed. You're right, it's a small chance, but like you said it's not 100% safe.
ReplyDeleteEloise had a life before Devon, but she wouldn't try and pass off someone's baby as Devon's; it's not in her nature to be that slippery. I don't focus much on the passage of time in Krisis, but just to put this into perspective, this happens roughly eight months since they started dating, and they are three months along, so there's no chance that it can be someone else's.
Leigh will delighted with the news.
LOL @ your poll choice.
Thank you.
I hope the pregnancy thing stires Leigh back to Bridgeport... i hope she remembers everything and complusion just wears off eventually.. Argh, why doesn't she remeber Jacqueline.. wouldn't it have appeared in the papers or something?? :D
ReplyDeleteIt's nice Leigh's happy for now.. though i always feel Jesse wants something more than just friends... it seems strange... you can't have a romantic relationship with your best friend it just doesn't work...
Can't wait for more though <3
Finally finished.. *phew*
Mango, *hugs* I hope she does too. Remember in Season 1, I did mention Leigh doesn't read papers, she hates all things tabloids, and that's why she she had no idea who the Frosts were or Laura for that matter, so no she doesn't, and in case the newspapers would have been about her and Krisis splitting up, it wouldn't have mentioned Jacqueline since no one else knows she's involved in Leigh's disappearance.
ReplyDeleteJesse cares deeply for Leigh, and once upon a time he did want something from her, but right now, they are both in complicated situations, and he wouldn't want to start something with her, especially with Krisis still a huge question mark. And I agree, some people just make good friends and not the best of lovers.
Thank you.
How sweet is Devon...see Eloise had nothing to worry about. Leigh will be very happy; they really, really need to find her....fast.
ReplyDeleteYay, more babies!
ReplyDeleteawwww dev and eloise having a baby..didn't see that coming, very sweet though. Leigh..sheesh that girl can get into shit with no one else around..i still have high hopes for her and Dev though/fingers crossed...edenz~
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