Type: Series
Characters: Tamsyn, Blake
Prompt: 62. Spring
Word Count: 438+
Warning: loosely based on the prompt word
Rating: M- (coarse language, adult situations, nudity. N.B-Applies to the whole series)
Summary: Tamsyn's home free
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Bridgeport & Riverview, present day...
Tamsyn was tucked safely inside a bus to Riverview, ten minutes away from the crime scene, when the hospital’s pediatrics wing was put on lockdown at 14:12pm.
Fifteen minutes away from Riverview, the baby woke up and began his incessant screaming. Tamsyn, with little experience with babies, didn’t know how to stop his angry cries. She tried to give him some formula, but he wouldn’t have it; she cooed at him, and sang lullabies but nothing soothed him.“Of course he is!” She hissed back defensively.
The woman shook her head and made it quite clear to Tamsyn she didn’t buy her big lie.
“What?” Tamsyn glared at her.
It was bad enough the baby wouldn’t stop screaming, now people in the bus, including the fatty next to her, were giving her suspicious looks.
“He looks nothing like you, that’s all,” the lady continued to shake her head, frowning darkly at her.
“He looks like his daddy, you moron!” Tamsyn snapped.
Mistake number two. She shouldn’t have been abrupt with the woman; now she’d remember her horrible encounter in the bus with the blonde lady holding the screaming black baby, and no doubt she’d tell her friends about it…and if news of a missing baby came out she would be finished!She tried to fix her mistake, but the large woman wouldn’t have any of it, she moved to another place, two seats in front of Tamsyn, and she was one of the first passengers to jump off the bus when they reached Riverview. Tamsyn tried to keep up with her so she could bribe her with money, but she’d vanished in the crowd.
If it was any other day, and at any other place, this moment in time would have been perfect. Spring had always been her favorite time of year. She loved bright colors, loved spending time in the sunshine, breathing in the heady fragrances from trees and flowers in bloom. To her, spring had always symbolized rebirth after months of dead things.
Dazedly she watched people rush off to their different destinations, busses pulled in and out of the depot, the different sounds and smells rattled her, and the baby’s continuous screaming overwhelmed her.
All she wanted, at that moment, was silence, but reality came knocking on her door then. She’d stolen a baby. Not just any baby, but The End
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Credits:
A special thanks to everyone at Desirable Discourses who responded to the thread on "how to steal a baby". You know who you are, I won't go through the roll call. I loved all of your ideas and thoughts, and without your overimaginative minds, Tamsyn's plan would not have been successful! So, that said, you are just as responsible as she is :)
Just kidding!


THE END???? NO NO NO NO NO!!!!! You can't!
ReplyDeleteWay to make us feel bad Val! Lol! I hate to admit it but her plan was perfect! I hate that she got away with the baby but with her little experience, she won't be able to handle the crying and hopefully that woman from the bus will speak up and alert them to Riverview!
What a great season Val! I love this so much I can even explain it!! Looking forward to season three!!
No, she made mistakes along the way, and they could get her in trouble.
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed the season.
Excellent finish. I hope Season 3 will start soon.
ReplyDeleteOH HELL NO YOU CAN NOT LEAVE IT THERE!!!!!!!!!!!...seriously you can you wrote it LOL.
ReplyDeleteWell she wasn't stupid enough to reveal where she was going...yet was stupid enough to steal a baby I want to wring her f'in neck!!!
I am sure Dev and Eloise will piece it together in no time, the lady on the bus, the landlord, someone has to come forward about it!
Excellent season...but seriously bummed there isn't more! lol
I was thinking as I came back from the weekend that there was so much catching up to do but as I began reading it went by too fast. Can't wait to see what you have in store for the next season, of course I will be waiting on pins and needles, so be quick...I don't like needles!!!
Ok, I'm moving this story back to the horror section, because only in a horror movie could Psycho Tamsyn steal Dev & El's sweet little boy!
ReplyDeletePLEASE let that woman on the bus go right to the police station!!! That, together with El recognising that watch will hopefully bring Tamsyn's little motherhood fantasy to a quick end!
Oh Hell No you didn't!
ReplyDeleteYou get your butt back in front of that computer right now Missy and start writing!
Don't make me come over there.
Ok, this entire post will be on everything I read starting at Simple because blogger decided to delete everything I (tried to) post
ReplyDeleteSimple:
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww,
1.Sorry, I didn't comment on Fear, I was in shock
2.TWINS!TWINS!TWINS!TWINS!TWINS!TWINS!TWINS!TWINS!TWINS!TWINS!TWINS!TWINS!TWINS!TWINS!TWINS!TWINS!TWINS!TWINS!TWINS!TWINS!TWINS!TWINS!TWINS!TWINS!
3. Ahem, wife?!?!?!?!
4. To me Krisis and Leigh's relationship seems to be built on: Love, Sex, The occasional Bitch/Bastard who lost there mind and tries to destroy it, but end up dead
5.I cracked up when it said "They were too far from a bed to stop it"
6.I think Grewsome is getting old now, I think I'll try and make up a new word
7. excellent val.
8.'supellent' a good one? Mixture of super and excellent. Nah, I'll stick with grewsome
Spring:
1.THAT CRAZY BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2. Blake is so cute
3. I'm glad Dev is accepting that Leigh is pregnant, I'll can only hope he doesn't go apeshit when he finds out that Leigh will be turned when she hits 30.
4. I so hope that woman will tell her friends about Tamsyn and the baby.
5. Dev will go bonkers when he finds out
6. More than bonkers really
7. NOOOOOO, you can't leave us in such suspense, so much suspense it stops my heart. Not the end.
8. One more thing, BIIIIIIIIIIIIITCH!!!!!!!!!!!!
9. See ya. :)
Oh, wow. I want to shoot her.
ReplyDeleteI hope they will find their baby soon.
Can't wait to see Krisis babies! I think Leigh will make a fine vampire :)
Seaweedy, Thanks. Season 3 is still a thought, sadly.
ReplyDeleteJenn, LMAO, I thought that was a good place to leave the season :)
ReplyDeleteNo, Tamsyn wasn't stupod, but she did make mistakes along the way.
Let's hope they do, it would be such a shame for Tamsyn to vanish completely with Blake, it would devastate those two.
Thank you. I'm so happy you found it entertaining.
Jill, lol. I guess now it does qualify to be moved back to the horror section. True, only in a horror movie could she pull it off and get away with it.
ReplyDeleteLet's hope the woman does come forward when the cops send out an amber alert on the stolen baby.
Yes, ma'am, Holley. Working on it :)
ReplyDelete>:\ im so mad she got away with the baby.
ReplyDeletein a way i could kina feel for her when the woman asked about the baby. for all she knew it was adopted, but at the same time i hate tamsyn! she stole someone's child!!
i cant wait for her to be caught!
Holy moly.
ReplyDeleteOh my god.
Cheesus.
I think I just.
I can't even.
Im just so.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG MUDEROUS RAGE!!!! ABJECT HORROR!!
I think im having a heart attack.
I HATE TAMSYN.
I WANT TO KIIIIIIILL HER.
THAT BLOODY EVIL BITCH STOLE THIER BABY!!!!
NONONONONO!!!
THE END?!
THE.
END.
HOW??!!?
HOW COULD YOU LEAVE US HANGING THAT WAY?!!?
Oooooh god. I need to lie down before I faint or something. This is so....Horribly horrid. Oh god no!
I got here, and I was like, late, and had to read from simple and it was so sweet, and Leigh and Krisis got all their problems layed out, sorted and hammered into the dust. It was all happy days and celebrations and I wa salike Awwww and how lovely!
And then I saw HER.
And I knew something horrid was going to happen.
Amaaaaaazingly amazing underneath all the horror in there! I LOVED IT!
Despite the obvious.
SHE WILL DIE.
....Im sure Eloise could make it look like an accident...Oooh Im so ANGRY!
Leah,
ReplyDelete1. No worries, you, Leigh and Krisis must have gone through a hell of a shock.
2. Yeah, Krisis and Leigh are having twins. I'm pretty thrilled about that. I put up some pic spam of their girls on Desirable Discourses and the guys over there asked if I can weave them into the story, and that's how the Council's decision was born, and how they come to be pregnant with twins now.
3. Krisis wants to marry Leigh ASAP, but she wants to to be turned first, so we'll see how that turns out.
4. Def. It is based on all those things, I'm thrilled you put love first.
5. They've never really had a real argument, and that was their first ever, and everytime they start arguing, they stop it by making love. So sadly for them this time around they couldn't. LOL.
6. I'm dying to see what new word you come up with.
7. Thank you *does curtsey*
8. Love grewsome better too.
Spring:
1. Who's the better bitch, her or Jackie?
2. Haven't seen anything yet. Strangely enough he has blue eyes, but his mom has grey ones and his daddy brown. How does that work?
3. Oh, but he will go apeshit when he hears that. That's the only thing he won't accept.
4. Will keep fingers crossed
5. He will kill somebody
6. True
7. Sorry, I ran out of steam and I haven't even started working on Season 3
8. Was that meant for me? I hope not :)
9. Later!
Dutchy,
ReplyDeletewow, that's a heavy reaction right there. But I imagine you're not the only one who wants to kill Tamsyn. Let's hope they do. You know what they say, most missing kids/babies are killed within the 1st 36 hours.
I put up some pic spam on Desirable Discourses of his all his girls. They are gorgeous, if I say so myself.
Sweetdreams
ReplyDeleteSorry *hides under a chair* We all knew this was coming. Adopted or not, if it's your baby you know how to soothe him, and take away his crankiness, that was the first give away, and of course the baby's appareance. But yeah, that woman was out of line for saying "he doesn't look like you", though her intentions may have been good.
She's gone through such lengths to get what she wants, even if she does get caught, she won't go down easily. Like she said, she'll die first before she gives him up.Thanks for reading.
Eni,
ReplyDeleteI'm guessing that wasn't the ending you were hoping for? I'll make it up to you in Season 3, I promise :)
Im holding you to that.
ReplyDeleteYOU CAN'T JUST END IT HERE!!!
ReplyDeleteThere is unfinished business we need to FIX!
Tamsyn made a HUGE mistake, stealing baby Blake was not a good idea. Especially from the hands of Eloise.
I was in an aww moment for the boy.. and laughing at the labor pains Eloise had to go through. But then i remembered his safety-ness..
Devon sure has to remember that Sasha impersonator is Tamsyn!!
Hope they piece the clues together and rescue Blake from the clutches of craziness~ I really wanted her damn plan to have failed.
It was so nice to see everyone gathered to hear the news of Leigh's twins. The happiness was through the roof <3
Val please continue with Season 3... or at least let my heart know that Blake is back home with his family...
Finished playing catch-up :D
Mango, Hands of Eloise???
ReplyDeleteIt the hands of Devon I'm worried about!
I think Blake got the blue eyes coz maybe somewhere in his family's lines someone must of had blue eyes. Evidence: I have green eyes, but my dad has brown and so does my mother. All my other Siblings have brown. No, I'm not an illegitimate child. Reason: My great, great grandmother had green eyes. Something to do with genealogy. not my thing it is like 1 in a billion chance.
I've caught up to this story (I never mean to get so behind) but I am glad I did and happier to see that my previous favorite character (Tasmyn) is now back in the mix! Although she is now beyond obsessed with Devon, I guess I have a thing for tragic characters. She's lost something that she doesn't know how to replace.But wow, stealing a baby is pretty low. I think I will have to find a new favorite character now. It should be fun to see how it all ends for Tamsyn.
ReplyDeleteAll I can say is OMG :| That bitch is crazy! (Sung to the tune of that song by Snoop Dogg ft Far East Movement)
ReplyDeleteBy far my favourite season (nevermind I have one and a half more to get through)
Can't wait to see what happens in season 3
You've really done an amazing job making Tamsyn a psycho! I hope Dev and Eloise find their baby boy soon