Genre: Paranormal romance, drama
Type: Series
Characters: Krisis & Jacqueline
Characters: Krisis & Jacqueline
Prompt: 95. Pride
Word Count: 750 +
Warning: coarse language
Rating: M- (coarse language, adult situations, nudity. N.B-Applies to the whole series)
Summary: Krisis gives Jacqueline the bitch slap she deserves. Well, almost...Or worse!
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Bridgeport, present day...
The room, bathed in total darkness, matched his black mood. He had been sitting there for some time, waiting for her arrival, thinking about the last few weeks. Thinking about his fallout with Krimsyn and J.D. earlier that day, and why it happened.
Everything led back to Jacqueline…
“I told you I’d find Leigh,” Krisis began when Jacqueline walked in, pushing Lily’s stroller in front of her.
“I’m glad,” Jacqueline replied. But he knew she was far from being glad. The self satisfied smirk she’d worn on her face for the past few weeks was gone now. Krisis could almost taste her panic and fear.
“He leapt from the couch. His sudden movement elicited a gasp from Jacqueline, and she backed herself into a wall. She was trapped, couldn’t dash for safety, she was too far from the front door.

“Relax, if I was going to kill you, I would have by now,” he informed her coolly as he picked up his daughter from her pram. He snuggled her for a while, dropping a few kisses in between her happy chuckles, before taking her upstairs to her crib.
Half an hour later, when he came back into the living room, Jacqueline was still there. She sat defiantly on the couch, refusing to walk away.
“I want the truth Jacqueline. Everything. I think I have an idea of what went on, but I need you to clarify a few things. You owe me that much! You robbed me of two precious months with Leigh. Weeks I’ll never get back.” Krisis turned off the TV, and looked at her expectantly. He was surprised when she conceded without putting up a fight. Her voice rose with each passing minute, and her pupils were dilated with excitement as she recounted her devious scheme.
“Don’t you see I did it for us, Krisis? I love you, and I knew in time you’d love me back again, you’d realize you and I are meant to be together. Leigh doesn’t deserve you!” Jacqueline finished off her explanation, a glazed look in her eyes.
“You’re out of your mind! I’ve never loved you…It was a business transaction, and it meant nothing to me!” Krisis glared at her, hating every moment he was forced to spend in her company.
“We have a child. You love Lily. So you must love me too!” Jacqueline pressed on, sinking deeper into denial. He hoped there was a cure for her delusions.
“I love Lily…Not you! You blackmailed me, and compelled Leigh into leaving me, what makes you think I’d love you? What makes you think I’d want to be with someone like you?” This time he lost it. He reached for her, and in that blind moment of rage, he forgot everything as he throttled the life from her.
“What does she have that I don’t? Look at me! I’m gorgeous. I’m a prominent doctor, I’m a catch Krisis Frost, and that human has NOTHING on me! I am every guy’s dream, in and out of bed. And your human is a fucking loser, a weak pathetic loser I nursed back to health. You’re out of your mind for even thinking about going after her!” Jacqueline croaked when he finally let her go, her green eyes dark with rage and fear.
He ignored her outburst. She was the most delusional, arrogant bitch he’d ever fucked, and if they didn’t have a child together, he would have told her exactly what he thought of her. But for Lily’s sake he held back on his expansive vocab of cuss words.
“I promised to kill you. Lord knows I should, after everything you’ve done. And if it wasn’t for Lily, I would do it in a heartbeat. But that little girl needs both her parents. Because of her, I’ll spare your life. But let me not be misunderstood Jacqueline, we are done. My people will be in contact with yours to work out a custody agreement. I want nothing to do with you going forward.” He motioned for her to get the hell out of his house.
“This isn’t over, Krisis! Leigh doesn’t deserve you!” She threw over her shoulder as she left the room. He stared after her, shaking his head, even when she was caught out she still found it hard to accept defeat, she was too proud to admit she’d lost, and her plan to tear him and Leigh apart had not worked.
She always had to have the last word…
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Note: This was supposed to be posted together with prompt 60. Complicated, but the shots were not yet ready because I was still searching for a baby carrier :( Anyway, hope this wasn't too confusing or random.
On a fantastic note, the poll results are in....drum rolls...more drum rolls...and some more...Okay, okay, I'll make the announcement already!
42 people (82%) would like to see Jacqueline dead, while 8 voters (15%) feel her life should be spared, but she should leave town. And only 1 person thinks a padded room will do her good. Thank you all for voting. Keep checking to see how Dr. Steinberg's storyline unfolds.















I love how he played that! Asked her half naked! I am not surprised that he showed her mercy. After all she is Lily's mother and he'd some day have to answer to her when she wants to know why he killed her bit- I mean mommy.
ReplyDeleteLeigh doesn't deserve him why? Cause she is human?
Oh God the second she meets her death there will be a new DD sigg!
Never random, always fantastic!
OMG HE CHOKED THAT BITCH!! And spared her...for now! WOOT! I loved this and I am home now so no loud outbursts that prompt the office to stare at me!
ReplyDeleteI loved it Val I love that he has the truth and knows what happened I just hope his heart isn't broken :( I'd just have to find him in pixel land and comfort him...in the VIP room WHAT?! :P
Excellent! Thank you!!
Qui, he's probably showing off, teasing her and letting her know this is the last time she'd ever get to see him in all his half naked glory.
ReplyDeleteIt's bad enough he Vladimir's blood on his hands, killing Jackie would give him peace, but it would destroy Lily in the long run.
In her mind, no one deserves Krisis, except for her, plus the fact that Leigh;s human plays a role too.
LOL. Looking forward to the second siggie.
Thank you :)
Tomorrow (which is today for me), it's the big W day...
*here comes the bride, all dressed in white*
Krisis vs. Jackie = Perfection.
ReplyDeleteI hate that bitch, but I'm sure there is a reason why she acts the way she acts. She's just so possessive and so arrogant and obnoxious, it's sickening. Then again, you have to step back and look at it from her point of view. She loves Krisis with all her heart. She's done everything imaginable to be with him, including giving him a child that he cherishes. I guess if I were in her position, I could see why she would want to get rid of Leigh. Plus, imagine that environment for her daughter. I can't even think of the questions that Lily will have as she grows. It's also kind of humiliating that Krisis chose a weak human over her.
Enough with the sympathy though. Unless there is a sudden twist of events, I'll be delighted when she is gone and will probably not even feel the slightest pang of sadness.... Okay this is a lie. Who else will I direct my hateful feelings towards? I guess Beau will take Jackie's place when she's gone/killed off. :D
~ Yeah! He told her what for!
ReplyDelete~ I was not confused,but I think Jackie is!lol!*snicker*
~ But she will not be as soon as Krisis has Leigh home & in her face!
~ I told you she has rather large tickets on herself!!!!!
~ I for one loved the pay back,but then it has only begun,when Leigh is home it will be in earnest!
~ Loved it Val!(",)
Arghh,
ReplyDelete1. You're torturing me with a half-naked Krisis, ain't it bad I'm slobbering over Uriah. I'm cheating on Krisis... with an angel, something Krisis already is.
2.Hell Krisis, call me and you won't be guilty that you killed Lily's mother, as much as I care for Lily, I don't think she needs the 'unwanted feeling' when she grows up, knowing she is there as a object for her delusional mother to get back the incredably-hunky-and-cute-and-sweet-and-down-right-sexy Krisis (another equally long description).
3. Kill Jackie. Death to the Bitch. I need more death threats, I used every known death method to kill a vampire and all of the things that kills humans. There must be more ways...Death by sexiness? Can I call Krisis for that?
4.Awesome chapter.
5.I swear Jackie doesn't look normal, human-like or vampire-like (And vampires meant to be handsome look at Krisis and Jared... oops I have said too much), she looks like a robot or a zombie or something not natural.
I can't believe she confessed! What an arrogant b*tch! Now that he knows the truth & he's ready to fight for custody - YAY!!!!
ReplyDeletePoor Lily does NOT need a mother like that - the poor kid will always have issues from Jekyll's resentment that "Lily didn't do her job" and keep daddy home.
I look forward to Lily and Daddy crashing a certain wedding....
I'm glad Leigh's called Eloise... the long awaited phone call was just too long. Glad Eloise can't keep her mouth chat :D At last Krisis knows where she is and can put the pieces together. ;)
ReplyDeleteDidn't realise the huge impact Krisis's situation was having... it was nice having that as a chapter... makes the story very life-like <3
How could Krimsyn just say that.. i guess Krisis needs to calm down but i guess love makes you think irrational? :P
Seriously Jacqueline, can't she just give UP already!!! "Leigh doesn’t deserve you!" like who is to say that?? And i hope the courts will give Lily to Krisis, the bitch doesn't need her :grr
Daijahv, lol. Yep he choked her and let her go, I don't know how he did that. I wouldn't have stopped till she was dead.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad it gave you an "OMG" reaction. The truth is liberating to some extent, but he still has a long way to go before Leigh's safe and sound in his arms again.
brookeshire, I like that your opening line. I figured this prompt should make a lot of people happy.
ReplyDeleteI think you've summed up her point of view perfectly. She does love Krisis, in her own twisted way I suppose, and she's having trouble letting go.
Your honesty is refreshing. LMAO, somehow I don't see anyone feeling sad for Jackie.
You'll only see Beau in one prompt, but his one act will impact on the rest of Season 2. He'll cause a lot of chaos in his absence.
Thanks for reading.
Leah,
ReplyDelete1. I threw in the shirtless Krisis just for you :)
2. Jackie's a very different person when it comes to her daughter, and Krisis can't take that away from her. She is a good mom, and he can't argue with that.
3. LOL @ "Death by sexiness", somehow I don't think that would be death now, would it?
4. Thank you
5. She looks extraordinary :)
Jill,
ReplyDeleteShe really didn't have much of a choice. As soon as she heard Krisis has found Leigh, she knew it's game over for her.
Yep, he's ready to drag her to the courts and get custody of his daughter.
Mhh, that's interesting what you said about Jackie resenting Lily because she never helped her hang on to Krisis. I never thought of it that way, because Jackie in my eyes is a good mom.
Daddy will def be there. But Lily will stay with Auntie Krimsyn and Uncle JD.
Thanks for reading.
Mango, it was about time she called home, and Leigh knew Eloise wouldn't keep her mouth shut. Krisis' actions have consequences for everyone around him. Thank you, I'm glad it rang real/true somehow.
ReplyDeleteKrimsyn has everyone's best interest at heart, including her brother's. He's not acting rationally at this point and someone had to reel him in, and she did the job well. Love does make people do strange things.
Nah, Jackie just can't give up, and if something doesn't happen to her to take her out of the picture, Krisis can rest assured it's not the last he hears from her. She loves him, and is having trouble letting go.
Thanks for reading, always.
LE GASP!
ReplyDeleteJackie is so completely and utterly insane and delusional it causes me physical pain. Wow. Like tamsyn but ten times worse and a lot more hateable.
She looked so faded beauty in this chapter! Like sure, she had impeccable feautures and whatnot but it was so fake it hurt.
OH I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!
=DDDDD
And naturally, Jackie's death.
Val, you have the BEST readers! I swear everyone makes me laugh!
ReplyDeleteHolding breath for wedding!
I just did a happy dance in my seat...though I would have probably made her kiss the floor...
ReplyDeleteI am about to cringe as I say this but...I am glad that he spared her for no other reason than his daughter.
And to finish it off I would have opened the door for her and put her ass to the end of my shoe and booted her out!
Another excellent prompt!
I don't want to see Jacqueline dead, I want Leigh and Krisis to get back together and rub that relationship in Jacqueline's face for the rest of eternity
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