50. Ends

Genre: Paranormal romance, drama
Type: Series
Characters: Devon, Eloise, Krisis
Prompt:002 Ends
Word Count: 563 +
Warning: language
Rating:  M- (coarse language, adult situations, nudity. N.B-Applies to the whole series)
Summary: Devon and Krisis have a royal tumble

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Bridgeport, present day

“What the fuck is this?” Devon swore furiously, and threw the Dear Devon letter on the table in front of Eloise. She scanned it quickly, shaking her head over and over.

It didn’t make sense. It wasn’t like to Leigh to just up and leave, without talking to anyone. Her words were few and short. She needed time away, to think. Things had gotten too hectic for her, and she was taking some time off. She’d be traveling. She never did buy that car, and she’d saved up enough from her job with the Frosts, so she had plenty to tide her over. She didn’t know where she was headed, but she’d call them as soon as she settled down. She loved them both dearly. And could they please hand Krisis his letter too? She trusted they’d respect her wishes and not make contact with her.
“This is crazy. Did you know?” Devon turned on her now, suddenly angry with her.

“No. I didn’t. She seemed okay but I knew she was a little stressed over the baby story.” Eloise replied, trying to think back to the last few nights. Leigh had been unusually quiet, but she’d never said anything, never hinted she was going through some internal crisis.
Devon grabbed his phone and dialed Krisis’ number.

“Get your ass over here. Leigh’s gone!” He growled into the phone, and threw it on the couch. Eloise kept her distance. She knew she shouldn’t try to calm him down when he was in a state. He’d cool off on his own. The longer she hovered around him, the longer it would take for him to calm down.
As soon as Krisis walked through the front door, chaos ensued. Both men lunged at each other, rolling around the floor. A fist here, a kick there. More growling and groaning. More kicks and punches.
“Stop it!” Eloise screamed, and both men drew apart then.
Krisis was instantly on his feet, while Devon tried to get his bearings.

Remind me again not to get into a fist fight with a vampire. He thought, as he tried to sit up.

“Where’s Leigh?” Krisis asked. Without waiting for an answer, he ran into Leigh’s room. Eloise came after him, and handed him his letter.

He dropped on her bed, and read the letter over and over. She pretty much said the same thing she did in Devon’s letter. She needed time to think. She was confused. She didn’t think she loved him anymore.
“Bullshit!” He growled furiously. She was lying through her teeth. He tried to think what could have sent her off. Sure he hadn’t seen much of her these past few days, but he’d talked to her every day, and told her he loved her. But come to think of it she’d been subdued during their phone conversations, not saying much at all. He should have picked up on that, but he was distracted by the baby and Jacqueline’s demands.
“Jacqueline.” His eyes narrowed. He had a sneaky suspicion she was involved. And if she was he was going to break her fucking neck. He’d had enough of her bullshit…
“We’ll find her,” he assured Eloise as he hugged her when he was leaving.
“In one piece!” Devon glared at him, and he nodded before blinking from the room. Taking the door would slow him down considerably...
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I bet you were all tired of the daily prompts, so thank you for indulging me always! But...
I thought this would be wrapped up on the 50th prompt, however it looks like it's far from over, so the saga will continue using the second prompt table...A little set up is in order, but the next prompt should be up next weekend, or the Monday after.
Thanks everyone for reading. Your wonderful, 'sometimes angry' and  'often crazy' comments made me smile every day since I took the Simfic 50 challenge. Your continued support mean so, so much to me. 
Thank you to my sounding board, and photo editor, you know who are you, don't let me call you out! 
Krisis has gone hunting, but he'll see you all next weekend, or maybe sooner. Who knows? :)





35 comments:

  1. are you kidding me!!!!! UHG I want JACKIE"S HEAD!

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  2. OMG OMG OMG!!!! I was so proud of Leigh for making a stand, and Jacqueline pulls THIS???? Oh, she needs to DIE!!!!

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  3. I am far from tired of daily prompts, I am so into this story and I am grateful you are willing to put so much effort into it!

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  4. No..NO! Say you're just joking and the next prompt will be out Monday...please say that!!!

    Just when it gets extra good!

    I must admit that I am pissed at Jackie's recent stunt but the Krisis and Dev fight kind of took a little bit of the edge off for me lol (Rehab, I really need rehab for this Dev crush!)

    Ready for me to be honest? I'll post it on DD.

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  5. Val you are fucking crazy (sorry) if you think dailies weren't always a welcomed treat!

    I so love that you are continuing!!! Thank you so much for these stories they were an incredible read and I can't wait for Season 2 :D

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  6. Kim, sorry to leave you on a bad note, I promise all the baddies will get what they deserve, Jackie included.

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  7. Jill, yeah Leigh tried to stand up for herself, and I was proud of her too, but Jackie, once again, proved to be the better opponent. LOL. She can't die just yet, who'll be the villain if she dies?

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  8. LOL, Qui, I wish I could :) Sorry :(

    Yeah, the Krisis and Devon fight, I kind of got tired of their male egos flying around, and I didn't put much tension into it. Glad you found some relief in it.

    *bites nails*

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  9. Seaweedy, I'm the one who's grateful, for everyone's tremendous support. Thank you, for your kind comment.

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  10. Daijahv, see what I mean about the "sometimes angry" and "often crazy" comments. LOL. Yours are always in both categories. But seriously, thank you for not tiring of my enthusiasm at this challenge. I still remember, and go back to the very first comment you left me. It still makes me cry and smile too. Season 2 is coming, don't say I didn't warn you when I start bombarding you with more prompts.

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  11. At least Krisis seems to know something is going on and not taking that note at face value.
    Jackie better hope her plan works and that Krisis doesn't find out what he did to Leigh
    Great Story Val! I can't wait for the next chapter!

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  12. Holley, you caught up just in time before I start working on the second table. Thank you. It must have been a lot for you to work though in one go, and I appreciate it all the more that you gave it a chance.

    Yep, Jackie had better pray she doesn't get caught. Thank you. I hope it doesn't disappoint.

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  13. HAHAHA I can live with crazy and angry...if only Vlad were still alive...sigh...he was a lot of both!

    You're an incredible artist and I've truly enjoyed this series. I mean I STALKED YOU just to read more HAHAHA

    P.S. Thanks for leaving us with topless Krisis! Don't think I didn't notice that :D YUM!

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  14. Yea, my topless Krisis has arrived

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  15. I want to commend you on blowing through all these prompts with such amazing deftness. You didn't sacrifice plot or characterization at all. Well don Val, take a bow, really. I look forward to more.

    I am not one to go squeee all the time, but here's one for you:

    *Squeeeeee!!!!*

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  16. ~ How can I top all these comments of praises!
    ~ Loved it! & you are welcome,anything for you!
    ~ I can not wait, will miss the daily promts!
    ~ Always! OK!(",)

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  17. - Hopefully Krisis will find Leigh and be able to reverse what that evil conniving biotch has done.

    - There is no way on god's green earth that Krisis could ever believe that Leigh doesn't love him...not after all they have been through...all they have talked about...all the passion they have shared...love like that doesn't just go away.

    - I really fear for Dr. Jekyll now, and she had better too, because once he finds out the shit is going to hit the fan and spread like a wild fire!

    - Was that really 50 prompts already? Didn't seem like it! I truly enjoyed this series and was so glad that I stumbled upon it. You are truly gifted with the written language. I am so glad that you are continuing on, can't wait to start reading the next series!

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  18. I've had some really tough RL stuff going on and can't always keep up, but I wanted you to know I think this series is absolutely fantastic! You created a great villain and a pair of wonderful lovers. Hoping all ends well for those who deserve it!

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  19. I AM IN NO WAY TIRED OF DAILY UPDATES!!!!!
    It sooo cannot end like this!
    When do we see Jackie's disembodied head please?
    Srsly, I want to chop it off and put it on display. AAARGH! OMG!
    Its just tooo much!
    Im in phsical PAIN for them.
    DAMN JACKIE THE BIATCH TO HECK!!

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  20. Argh... what it's finished !?!
    Get the next prompt table out now... i need your lovely juicy writing daily <3

    DAMN YOU, Jacqueline... one villain was enough already! Your a freaking doctor.. man i hate that women to guts.

    I hope Krisis finds her and really brings her back in one piece... god knows what compulsion could do to her...

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  21. Daijahv, Vlad was vermin, he had to go quickly; torturing women is a big no no in my book...But there will be another villain, for two prompts, three at most.

    Thank you, that makes me so, so happy. And yeah, my deranged, crazy stalker. I've enjoyed getting to know you. I'm glad you stalked me. Now I sounds as crazy as you.

    Grrrr, I just love this redhead. Where's the "make real" button when I need it.

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  22. Leah, another fan of topless Krisis? I really, really have to do that photoshoot now.

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  23. Karen, Thank you. It was great fun working with the prompt table. I'm so happy you think the plot and characterization remained constant throughout.

    *Squeeeee's back*

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  24. Karima, hehehe, you can try, come on, go ahead and make my day. LOL.
    -I'm glad you liked it, and don't complain when I start bombarding you with plot and storylines again.
    -Ha, you're just saying that :)
    -OK

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  25. NyGirl,

    -Let's hope so, but remember Jackie is an ancient vampire, and very crafty. So she may good at concealing her tracks.
    -True, Krisis saw right through her note. If there's one thing he's sure of it's their love for each other, and there's no way in hell he'll let her go so easily.
    -LOL, I laughed at the image of shit hitting the fan and spreading like a wild fire. LOL. Love it. But you're right. She should be very afraid.
    -Yeah, it was 50 prompts, but I know what you mean, it doesn't feel like it sometimes and I have to go back and count to make sure. The first table was to prove to myself I could do it, that's why I worked through it so quickly, and the second I'm going to take my time now that the challenge is complete, so 50 prompts for the next 50 weeks :)Thank you for your wonderful comment on the writing, I've had great teachers, and amazing inspiration from so many Sim storytellers.

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  26. Beth, no worries, I understand. I'm sending you positive energy all the way from South Africa, and I hope things work out in RL. *big hug*

    Thank you, I didn't know you were following it. True, happy endings for those who deserve them.

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  27. I AM IN NO WAY TIRED OF DAILY UPDATES!!!!!
    It sooo cannot end like this!
    When do we see Jackie's disembodied head please?
    Srsly, I want to chop it off and put it on display. AAARGH! OMG!
    Its just tooo much!
    Im in phsical PAIN for them.
    DAMN JACKIE THE BIATCH TO HECK!!

    Anon,
    -Don't tempt me. I'll start flooding you with more soon, and you'll wish you hadn't encouraged me.
    -Nah, it's not over. Mhhh Jackie's disembodied head, you say? We'll see. LOL.
    -LOL, I think it's safe to say she'll piss you off some more in the next few prompts.
    -Thanks for reading.

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  28. Mango, what a nice surprise to see a comment from you. I didn't know you were still following this. Yeah, it's over for now. Working on the next table already :)

    LOL. Yeah, but the one villain died, so someone had to be the baddie.

    -Let's hope he gets to her before some serious damage gets done here.

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  29. As you may have guessed I didn't read them daily any ways, I just let them add up and then read it all together. This is my strategy for everything I read though heh. Any ways, the ending was great! Jackie is a really good villain...or umm as good as a Villain can be I spose. Can't wait for the dailies to come back up heh.

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  30. Aeon, I figured that much, but I'm glad you caught up whenever you could. That she is.

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  31. *happy dance*
    I am done with Season 1 - several days ago actually.
    Grrrr off with Jackie's not-so-ugly head. That woman knows no bounds. I hope Krisis will rip her head off and hang it on his wall. Or at least feed it to some carnivorous animal.
    I'm curious to know what Leigh's up to in season 2.

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  32. eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeKkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk!!!! This so totally rocks!!!!!

    I'm actually kinda happy that I'm so far behind, that way i can go right into the next season lol yay!!!

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  33. Argh!!!! But what a delicious cliff hanger and thankfully since i'm so far behind i don't have to wait long to find out what happens next..........

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  34. Wow! I cant wait to read Season 2!!

    Jackie is sooooooooo evil! I cant believe that she placed a compulsion on Leigh and now Leigh is really gone!

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  35. I still have a long way to go before I catch up to where the story is now, but having finished season one, I just wanted to say how much I'm loving this story!

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